přidáno 04.10.2018
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I close my eyes, afraid of dreams
My closest cry, I see their tears
But forever my sin will be on my skin

I don't know how, I don't know why
When I see my face, I want cry
'Cause that crash, my jaw smashed

The car could be my grave
I never forget the day
When I was my own killer
Someone gave me a grace
The person I believed
Became the biggest liar

Your cold soul and empty words
And your present, very hurts
I can not you trust, that's why you saw me last

Rise from the death and start again
Tell me the truth I'll understand
But you will never find a place in my heart

Wake up
And listen to unending silence
Stand up
Between life and death you ballance

The car could be my grave
I never forget the day
When I was my own killer
Someone gave me a grace
The person I believed
Became the biggest liar
přidáno 04.10.2018 - 23:16
diky moc za nazor, vazim si toho. Byl to muj prvni pokus o psani textu v anglictine. A jelikoz moje anglictina neni dokonala, tak chapu, ze tam jsou urcite nektere nedokonalosti.
přidáno 04.10.2018 - 21:49
Not bad, I suppose... But I have to say the imperfect grammar, unless for some reason intentional, threw me off and the topic also wasn't one to catch my honest interest. But keep trying!

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